I'm so sorry but the grammar is annoying again ... But that's understandable if you're using your phone (which I think you may have mentioned somewhere) ... But I also don't like the way you spun Brendon Urie ... I like the originality of the story and how you spun his character web into something dark and twisted and different ... If was a nice change however because I'm a fan I personally don't like the way Brendon is portrayed ... Other than personally I believe that this story has real meaning and is a great read ... I hated the Brendon character change but I couldn't tear my eyes away from it ... Very well done, very captivating and hooking, excellent job!
Much Love ~ Kat