Hey, great story so far. The problem with Suzume is that she wants to sacrifice Moegi for the greater good and if this doesn't work kill him on the spot. With the descendants of the moon... well a crazy cult with crazy dreams, at least the leaders know about infinite tsukuyomi and aren't working for a cause they are ignorants. I can't wait for the next update, will you continue the NarutoxHanabi one?
Author's response
Thank you.
Yes, I still intend to finish The Promise. Right now though I'll be focusing on Eroninja.