I'm not sure when you wrote this , but it is a great fan fiction. great emotional play, although a bit to much at times which make it seem too much like a 21st century soapie such as vampire diaries and the like lol . Although the quality in the story itself more than makes up for that extremely minor flaw. Although I am no expert but these are the only few issues I had presuming the book is already finished. Firstly i understand that it is a new story but your links and references to the original Harry Potters have become scarce, a good reference invokes nostalgia and keeps people engaged knowing its the same characters they originally read about. Sometimes it gets very very emotional for long periods of time which for being an adventure lover like me took its toll. I love how you integrated Harry Potter still making him a powerful wizard but I would have liked him to be included more as well as the other characters, this would be mainly to create relief from the main plot revolving around Draco and Ginny. But even with all this it has been an amazing read to this point and I would be lying if i said I wasn't hooked. If you were ever to release your own book I would happily buy it
Author's response
Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot to have a reader share their thoughts and opinions with me regardless of anything negative. I take it all as constructive criticism. This is my first fanfic I've written so I wasn't sure how readers would respond. Its been over a year since I've completed this and I'm still getting reviews on it so I'm guessing I did something right, lol. Thanks again!!!!