All right, where to start? On the plus side, I rather like this so far and see no real problems with it in terms of storytelling or grammar.
On the other hand, I cannot really believe Kakashi would teach the damn Uchiha Kage Bunshin. Wasn´t it explicitly stated in the series that only Jounin and higher are safe at using it? Canon Kakashi was an ass and a worthless teacher, you made him even worse. Here´s hoping he gets in trouble and Naruto gets off the damn team....