Hey 42, thanks for the story. It is a very good. Looking forward to the next one.
I just have one suggestion that you should repost this story (and the next one too) in more populated wesites like FanFiction net or Archive Of Our Own.
Not only more people will be able to find this fantastic story there but you will be able to gather a larger amount of reader reviews there (which might help in your future writing).
Ficwad is a nice site but it is not really search friendly. You cannot directly browse via tags here or filter the browse list via size, date, popularity etc.