I'm... Amazed and Thirsty for more! I started reading this on a whim months ago which became chain-reading, and finally caught up + LBB, Promise, Pride and Antithesis... after hours writing and adjusting this review to my satisfaction, I have to apologize if it's long. it cover's all of the basic Eroninja so far out(ch84). if you don't want to read it all... TheLemonSage Rules!
As amazing as the sex-scenes are... I have to say the spotlight of your writing goes to the mentality showed in each character and details you've added to the world.
Canon-Naruto's main characteristic was that He was too-stupid-to-think outside of a combat scene(much like many other notable anime characters...), and a mid-fight epiphany every bad-guy. which sadly deadpanned a number of potential storylines and details.
However Eroninja-Naruto might be simple-minded, but still capable of learning(basic clone), adjusting(Gave up the Hokage title!) and experimenting(Shadow clone D) while questioning "justice or revenge" without being immune to it(the worst problem I have when characters hit that question.)! I'm a little bit worried he might be remembering everything he said earlier in the story/his life word-for-word...
Loving the Menma-bad-guy twist, much more character than the movie had. The part where you added in Koharu's 'death' was an priceless detail!
The entire re-telling of Danzou's buildup and death, i couldn't get enough! the secrets, twists and surprises!
Pointing out that Worlds/Leaders can be evil is AMAZING.
The hints that the Daimyo could be working together to keep the shinobi population down/from taking over...
The Raikage, where to begin... Entering any alliance with the anticipation that it will fail, only guarantee's that it will. can't wait to see what he does next...
Sasuke becomes leader of Darkness village in the center of the three swords alliance~ brilliant!
Adding in pre-existing characters from games/anime gives it that amazing fanfic(nerd) feeling while adding subtle background for characters that we can recognize or look up!, for great examples: Miya(sekirei) Gin(Agame Ga kill) everybody recognizes the Sekirei girls instantly while Gin required a bit more remembering/searching
Did shadow clone D leave a corpse? was somewhat unclear... they made him a grave, but if he just 'poofd' then.. why
? it would have been clear to any shinobi that it was a bushin.. is the corpse-DNA the same as Naruto's? can Kabuto edo-tensei D? can he resurrect Himself!?
Why... in all stories "so far" does it feel like a perpetual blue-ball to any attempt at a second chunin exam including Naruto... Canon-Naruto's time-skip caused the entire story to speed up faster and faster... but even now it's impossible for him to graduate from being genin.. how did they let him become hokage....
I had to consider Yamame's challenge: If the air transports are available, first attack the capital city killing the X Daimyo civilian casualties would be a bonus. Immediately(to minimize resources) retreat/refuel, by the time refueling is complete(4-8 hrs) Shinobi city will just be receiving news of the Daimyo's death and getting the political heat and confusion for it. commence attack on Shinobi city during confusion, focus on kage. depending on remaining forces after target, retreat or continue attack. if the city falls = victory, if forced to retreat, the X country loses Daimyo and kage at same time. between political confusion/accusations and military weakness, another country will surely take the opportunity to attack.
(interestingly I cut it down from being fire-country/kohona +naruto specific to being a one-size fits all attack plan. that has flaws, the Daimyo are protected by their own # elite shinobi and the various kage are strong on their own.)
I'm getting worried about how many Details/possible sidestories your dropping out/having to keep track of...
Chunin exam applicants you will have to keep track of. The 'Naruto' exams had what... 2 large countries and 5-7 smaller countries giving X genin teams(excluding Kaze because they only sent in team-Gaara to be a distraction) = X genin per chunin exam... you've built up 3 or 4 seasons? now add in lightning country + whatever Raikage/Sasuke is planning.
if another alliance/attack gets in before the next chunin exam i can only wonder why they even bother trying(or if Shikamaru will survive the paperwork from another...).
Vega(eternal-escaping-villian), S.I.N. Corporation(your building this one up for after you've got the 5 elements 'allied'!).
Water country/Mizukage negotiations, it will be interesting what those adventures will be like... and the Highschool DxD girls~
Sea country and the evil scientist.
Kurotsuchi how long can she maintain her kunoichi status/position while being sleep deprived with that kinda trauma?
Iwa is a chapter looking to be as complicated as Water country that's even harder to begin communications with...
How long till Bear Country falls to it's 'terrorists'...
If the black-market can get it's hands on that amount of demon miasma, 'the harem' should be able to get their hands on a decient amount through 'Priestess Shion'.
Senju-zetsu is the basic so, Sasuke-zetsu is the upgrade but will we see Madara-zetsu!?, if it works for senju and uchiha why not Hyuuga-zetsu?
Will the black kyuubi kill Sora(i hope so!)!? will Naruto simply force it out of him whole!?
Find out next time on Eroninja the Erotic Ninja~