sweet as. so more people know about Harry now. nice to see that they were able to look past everything and accept Harry. Still they now know that they have lost a son, so that should be difficult. i would have liked to see a little sister for Harry and James, but she was killed off. Any chance of another.
i don't mind the Harry/Lily or Harry/Ellen relationships so far. they see friendly enough and they have a close bond. Its good to see Harry acknowledge that he might have changed that future. I read so many fics, where Harry is hell bent on getting James and Lily together, its become stupid. I guess this way Lily is allowed to make her own decisions. and so far james doesn't seem to be all the attracted to Lily (well they are 11). i would have liked to see a furious Harry, when james and Sirius pulled that little stunt earlier, but i guess what you did was okay.
anyway, update soon. congrats.
Author's response
Little sister Holly will be along in a year.
I think James/Lily is a lot like Ron/Hermione, except James pulls stunts instead of arguing.
"T"