Like many of the other reviewers, I thought this was a well thought out (excellent) chapter.
However, I'm disappointed that you choose to add Rin to the harem... IMO, a nicer touch would have been for Naruto to plot out a path returning Rin to Kakashi. Another med-nin in the mix is just padding.
And yes, I know this criticism is coming 50 chapters too late... but it still needed to be said.