Heya!
Just wanted to say how much I enjoy this story. Actually, dunno if this counts as good or bad, but I find myself so engrossed by the plot that often skim over or plain skip the lemon to advance it faster (ehehe...)
Still, I'd like to point out how frustrating can feel for new readers to try to keep up with the 'limelight' chapters. Wouldn't it be better to include them in the main story? Or at least have some cues so we know where they are supposed to go (There aren't any cues I've missed, right? that would be embarrassing...)
Anyway, keep up the good work!