I highly approve of this type of Harry Potter. Though I've never read canon What I've heard about that one is he was a doormat even after beating Tommy-boy. I also like that Harry's with Hermione. Normally I'd be asking you why Ron was even allowed to be there as he's turned his back on Harry multiple times. But having read that the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder bespelled him to be like that I dropped my disapproval of him. Now that he's got Luna cracking the whip over him, so to speak, I 'm quite sure he'll improve. From the hints so far, I think her rewards system will see fast improvement. Now there's only one thing left for me to say, I WILL FINISH THIS DAMN STORY IF IT KILLS ME THIS TIME!! I've started it at least three times and lost it as many.