Hi! Enjoyed your story! Has a lot of potential if you wanted to add to it and make it a book. Very few stories start so late in the tv series, they always start with the first episode in the series, which means they usually get tired of writing by season 5. Starting it at the time when Dean is a demon makes it different from a lot of other SPN fanfics. The only thing I would change is to give your character name instead of leaving it to the readers. I don’t know why, but having to read Y/N over and over always irritates me, and it distracts me from the storyline. Anyways, nice job on your first story!
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked my story :) If you read any of my other stories I would love some feedback!