I actually got scared at chapter ten and thought that there was no way you could pull this off. I figured it was gonna be one of those complete for first year stories, but you did it. I know you feel like dropped the ball on this but you really completed the story better than many of those who do a time travel, deal with Voldy and then get lost making a new bad guy. This was really good.
Author's response
Well, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story, it was fun to do something non smutty for a change and, even though I am still unhappy with the ending, it seems to work for most folks.
Red