Wow, this is absolutely amazing! I know it was posted more than a year ago, but I hope you still read the reviews because I felt like I just had to compliment you on this story. It was very entertaining, well-written and also amazingly in character; I could picture this being the actual beginning of "Magical Me". Also, I legitimately laughed out loud at times, for example when Lockhart mentioned thinking "not Hufflepuff, not Hufflepuff" as he wore the sorting hat, then proceeded to say that there was nothing wrong with being a Hufflepuff.
Excellent work! It deserves more attention.