The tags listed for the main story do not include rape. For that I hope you suffer in some way. Rape is not entertainment. Those who use it as such are sick bastards. There are many people who don’t want to or can not deal with such things and for you to put it in there with graphic detail and with no flag warning? Scum! There was no reason to go into such detail you sick pervert.
On a side note you are starting to have Harry do some pretty stupid things to drive plot forward. Dumbing down your characters to force plot points is not good writing. For that matter, I understand this is a Harry centric story but you have hermione as a useless bedwarming character. She has contributed nothing except sex. So much for her brains.
Your increasingly poor decisions are ruining this. As it is, I pray karma kicks your ass.