Review for Betrayal

Betrayal

(#) Staryfury0901 2019-02-13

Still awaiting that supposed update. Though I do still think the story was good as far as it went. Though Harry is rather stupid. He had more then enough warning that his former friends were after ALL his money but did nothing. In his place, I'd've moved it all out of the country and had the Goblins tell everyone I'd given it all to muggle charities. Of course by that time I'd be well out of the country to one where both Fumblemort and ICW had no power to force me back for a kangaroo court. But I wouldn't give Fumblemort nor Voldemort a billionth of a Knut. Then, wherever I settled, I'd have the lethal wards put up to insure that Fumblemorts' disorder could survive trying to get through.