Alright so wow I know this review is super late. Like years in the making, this was a great story.
Personally there were flaws I noticed. The dice roll of death definitely shouldn’t have been mentioned though it seemingly worked out for the best to round the story off with a lesson from Harry about allowing evil to raise.
However on the positive side I am a huge Harry/Hermione fan and Luna is a very close second.
The story was well written and extremely entertaining.
I do have one thing about Draco though. I know you made him into a absolutely waste of human rubbish in your story and I can see why you did, however in the books/movie he doesn’t have a choice in the matter. It was either do a Voldemort says or your family dies. By the end of the seventh book he realized the error in he own ways and even somewhat helped Harry out.
Well this was all I wanted to say, again this was a very enjoyable story