Review for Loves Punishment

Loves Punishment

(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-29


newbie of the week= you. seriously.

okay, since i'm the first to review (haha, alex and katy suck) i would like to also be the first to say the way you introduced this character is amazing. the set up is amazing. it allows for a descriptive introduction of the character without being too forward, or too vague. it was seemless. honestly.

i am really intrigued with this. your protagonist is obviously hiding something, and i can't wait to find out what it is.

do you watch a lot of crime drama? because this first chapter was very detailed and i think you just may have something with this...

Author's response

Ha! It is very amazing to me that you reviewed my story! Wow! I have actually read one of yours and loved it! So...Thank you!