wow.
newbie of the week= you. seriously.
okay, since i'm the first to review (haha, alex and katy suck) i would like to also be the first to say the way you introduced this character is amazing. the set up is amazing. it allows for a descriptive introduction of the character without being too forward, or too vague. it was seemless. honestly.
i am really intrigued with this. your protagonist is obviously hiding something, and i can't wait to find out what it is.
do you watch a lot of crime drama? because this first chapter was very detailed and i think you just may have something with this...
Author's response
Ha! It is very amazing to me that you reviewed my story! Wow! I have actually read one of yours and loved it! So...Thank you!