Review for Hidden Beneath

Hidden Beneath

(#) littleolmee 2006-11-30

Just found your story, so far it's very interesting. Well written, I haven't noticed any spelling or grammar mistakes that scream out at you or take away from the reading. I enjoy your idea of Naruto and Kakashi henging into animals, interesting twist there. Hope you stick with it. I'll keep an eye out for more from you, keep up the good work.