You know this story you have many strange points, good, bad, and very contradictory, how qiyomi forces the relationship of youroichi and soifong, I think you just wanted to write yuri, I think the story would have gone better without that, how kiba is stays with aeris and yuffle, which is strange it seemed that you wanted to link them to naruto but in the end you backed off, but you randomly joined tiffa with naruto, so we all adore tiffa enough to leave her with kiba, although I honestly think that you lost a lot the path of history, naruto no longer seduces or tries to get girls or people for his goal, it seems that he just gets carried away by everything that happens around him and does not think about things, he feels hollow
It seems strange to me that you pay more attention when developing the stories of the children of the moon than the relationships of naruto, it really seems that since you added lls bijus the story became extremely chaotic, anko trying to get hana's dogs to ride it, naruto accepting what qiyomi does with the final fantasy trio, it seems that you lose several things in the story, I do not think it is very interesting to know about the love life of kiba or lee, it is somewhat annoying that you try to develop them more than the harem girls , There is so much to exploit, but it seems that the story became annoying, I still do not read the mafias arc, but it promises a lot for me, open the map to the sound of the land of water and the problems that this country may have, As in the small ones, it would be interesting to see how Naruto gains ground there, since it is something annoying that he has not done much for his goal, seriously, it seems that he is only standing and lets everything happen, there are no consequences, Anko could try to make Some dogs Ride Haruka, that was one of the most unpleasant moments of the fic, I really hope you give naruto more sense, it feels like it barely has weight in the story, I think that also the group of girls looking for possible candidates takes something away to the fic, of a naruto who tries to seduce girls or show him the goal he is trying to achieve, I hope that in the following arcs you show more of how naruto influences the story in a more significant way, it seems that the fact that everything he does remains in the shadows are creating a kind of wall for development