Review for The Younger Potter Twin

The Younger Potter Twin

(#) JBern 2006-12-01

Nice continuing chapter. It's interesting to see Harry 'interacting' with Hogwarts on this level. You do a nice job without overdoing it. I like the relationship between Harry and Ellen that you are developing. She needs a bit more in her character. Right now she's a bit thin, but your Summer visistation chapters should give you ample opportunity to flesh her character out.

Looking forward to more~Jim