(#) Pols 2006-12-01
Only read chap 1 so far, but it's ace! Loving your writing style, really follows nicely. Liking the character development already, really feel like we are getting to know you characters personalies. Also feel i can identify with your main character in a way.
Author's response
A new reader, cool! It's kinda funny to have someone read your story after it's been finished. Not sure why...
Thanks for your encouraging words. :) I hope you like this story. In a later chapter the story line is splits into two plot strands but I guess you are able to read anyways. ;)
Thanks for the r&r. It's always great to have people take the time to comment.