(#) hga 2006-12-01
This story has ... possibilities---for one thing, it kept my interest through these first seven chapters. But it has one terrible fault: no dramatic tension at all. Harry is just too damned powerful in too many ways, he and Dumbledore/the OotP don't seem to be hiding anything big from each other, Harry has many girls throwing themselves at him ... what is there to compell the reader to turn to the next page?