No, Sarah, no! That is not allowed. Pete isn't supposed to snatch Patrick's woman right out from under him. I'm sorry but you're simply going to have to rewrite it, no matter how awesome it was. I liked the little "truth" game you threw in there. I personally thought "dare" was overrated. Though I'm not thrilled about what is going to happen, but I can't blame Meg. Pete is a sexy bitch. Loving the story. :)
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you just made me laugh really hard, and with the loveliness that is college, i really needed that laugh...