FicWad

First off, I would like to say that this is raw emotion. You can feel it. The wording shows your anger.

Now, this is my opinion, so take it for what it is worth to you. A bit more formatting would enhance this, I think.

"Forget I said anything; just forget it.
It's nothing.
Just ** it, right?
Can't stop...stop thinking.
Let me be alone tonight."

etc.

The formatting now makes it a bit hard to read and garner the emotion behind the words.

Otherwise, this is good. Maybe not Keats, but then, I do not read him (for a reason).

Thank you for sharing.