I liked the story! Poor Kankurou... but you got their ages wrong.... if temari were 8, Kankurou would be 8 too, he is just behind her by months, and Gaara would be 6. But I liked it very much. Lol, "Uhhhh, it's..... war paint!"
Author's response
Actually, according to every website I've been on, there's a year between them. Which is why I made him seven.
I'm glad you like it, I did work hard on it, and no one really seems interested in it.