Hmm...it has lot's of potential as far as I can tell. It's a bit confusing at the moment, but I'm sure things will become clearer as the story continues.
This story sparks many questions: is the Akatsuki village against Konoha, or were they just after the baby? Who's Akira? Is Orochimaru actualy alive, or is there a new and perhaps more powerful enemy who has, well...eliminated him?
What does everyone look like now? How old are they? Is Naruto married? Does Sasuke still have the curse seal?