they want to kidnap harry in the middle of the day and diagon alley? with dozens of witnesses?...clever...(enter humored sarcasm here =P)
why is sirius alive? in the first chapter you said he is dead? if he had been rescued from the veil, i think he would have contacted harry, even against dumbles orders....
great chapter! you just have to wonder what tonks did in that shop...=P
Author's response
Yeah, I knew I'd forgotten something. It's fixed now, so don't worry.
Pillsy