Wow, I have to say this is one of your the better chapters of this story, the last scene is brilliant I really can't wait to see how Harry gets out this fine situation with out getting in to much trouble. It's nice to see Harry growing up and noticing that the world is not black and white. Keep up the good work and update this story soon I can't wait.
Sorry I know that your not going to updates just because I say so I'm happy to wait until the next update.
Working on chapter 16 now.~Jim