I have to say, I really like the way you're doing this story. Starting each chapter with a hint of the 'happy ending', giving us clues about how it works out and then giving us the detail that Harry's involved in. Very nicely done. I wouldn't mind getting a POV from Tom soon, as he's gotta be stewing away at the lack of effect he's getting, and especially the lack of fear of him that the Founders are causing.