Well now THAT was a surprise ending for the chapter. Never seen that coming. I do agree with Harry getting a bit miffed with Looney instead of Luna. I mean who wants to figure out Looney when your recovering from a Korean hit-wizard style 'lesson' and have everything else going on that he does?
It would be wise for Harry to explain that Luna is for now while Looney is for lazy Sunday afternoons with nothing much going on. But that is only my opinion for what it's worth.
Question... will you keep going with this story, or does it end at the beginning?
Neither Harry nor Luna are good with relationships. It'll boil over in this chapter. The story ends with Harry preparing to return to England. The sequel picks up there.~Jim