Wow you hand write your stories? I tried that once, and I couldn't write fast enough for my ideas that were pilling up in my head LOL.
Well I like this story so far. If I were Delilah, I'd be so insulted to be told I look like Nosey... AND to go to the city of love without your LOVE, like AS IF! Okay I'm over it.
Wish your chapters were much longer. But I guess, like you said, when it's had written, it's shorter. You can always add stuff when you're typing it up. Extend it a little more maybe? You're leaving us hanging here. That's good though, but you know..
Anyhow, good stuff, can't wait for an update.
-Gucci84
Author's response
I'd most likely be slightly insulted as well, but that was the only reason I could think of to split them up. The only reason I hand write them is because I never have time to write them at home. I've been writing this in the weirdest places, as Darks can tell you. I might extend it, we'll see. Thanks for reading!