i'm sorry i haven't reviewed yet. let me take this opportunity to tell you i think your writing style is superb. like katy said, it's original and refreshing. she's going to punch me later for not reading this sooner.
i think the way you write the interaction between the members of the band is very realistic, but one thing i don't understand is how pete hasn't met melissa yet, being that she's andy's sister. maybe i missed something.
when i first read this i thought their would be a connection between pete and jess, but looking back on it now she's perfect for patrick. she's a little bit on the shy side, but for the most part she has an amazing personality. on top of that, she has passion for what she does. you wrote her character VERY well. i love her.
now, surely melissa can't be perfect. maybe it's just in pete's eyes. i dunno.
anyway, i'm giving you a rating point because you rock. keep it up