(#) BJH 2006-12-07
All I can really say is that it ended too soon. I know you have other stories in process - since I'm reading them - but I can't help but think that this one deserved to be longer. Maybe build through their second year with a more climactic final fight over the summer. Have V make himself a silver arm or something.
It was one of your best works and a unique twist to the time-travel idea. Very well done.
BJH
PS How about a short epilogue showing the two sets of characters, James, Lily, Hermione, Luna, Remus and Tonks meeting up in the afterlife and discussing their lives and how long Harry has left to live?