Collette's eyes shot up and looked directly into Patrick's. He got chills from the fear and sadness that were found in them. beautifully written, and it sets a very good visual. that's my favorite line in this chapter.
coco is still keeping secrets. hmm. i wonder how much more drama you can add? you're amazing, so i have no doubt it will be flawless.
gah. i tired and i should sleep. take this rating point. i made it for you.
Author's response
I love hand-made rating points. pins to fridge for all to see
Thanks for always pointing out points in my story that you like. Being the author, I don't appreciate them as much as I should, and you always show me "the light" as they say. Who says it...I dunno.
Sleep! I did last night, and I feel great!