There are a couple of things that I have to say about this story. One, you ended it way to short, however you did recap well. You did do that so I will forgive that. However, you left so much to the imagination that I do have to admonish you for that. Additionally Voldemort's demise was done so easy that it didn't do it justice. I hope that you don't end your other timeline story the same way. Please update.