I like casteshipping, so of course I enjoyed this story! I'd like to see more of this, especially more of an explanation of why Atem hates his life as Pharaoh. (Like: does he hate being Pharaoh because he fell for Bakura, or did he fall for Bakura because he already hated life at the palace for some reason?) Not that it matters, really, but I'm curious. I'd also just like to see more of Atem & Bakura together, either in the past or the present. ^_^
tsutsuji
Author's response
I already wrote the next two chapters for this fic, and they help explain things a little better. Of course, they can't just go and explain everything, that'd ruin what I'm trying to do with this story.