I've loved Narnia since I was 10 and first read "The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe". I'd always felt sadness that Susan was the one who, in the end, was the odd one out and left alone.
Your lovely moving story showed her regrets on the loss not only of her family, but of Narnia. I love the glimpse you give the one of the reasons for Susan's removal, and the message of hope you leave us with.
Very nicely written, very in character.
Author\'s Response: Thank you for your review. I tried my best to stay faithful to the book, while still expanding on and "explaining" Susan's role; I really appreciate hearing that you enjoyed it, and found it to be in character.