Amusing, and intriguing! I'm definitely interested in what comes next. Piratical goodness-!
I would suggest another proofreading, however. There are some odd commas, apostrophes, etc., that need tweaking.
Author's response
Sorry I don't hang out around much on this site when I have nothing to update and I had overseen your review. Thank you for your comment though. I'm glad you're enjoying yourself and sad to say I know what you mean about my shaky style at times. Unfortunately my betareaders keep running off on me. -_-