Woa! Good Story!! Oh Em Gee! Lol.
 You put two of my favorite bands in this story, how could I not love it to death!?!?
 Kudos to you! Its well writen with a good story line. Its also its very enjoyable. I'm a little sad That Pete is such an enourmous asshole in this story cause im quite the large Pete Wentz fan. Though, I love My Chem alot to and Mikey is pretty hot (even though Im a Frank Iero fan but Sshh I like Mikey second best!) 
 Anyways, I hope eveything works out and Pete stops being such an ass and they become friends again...maybe more...wink wink. Haha. 
 Keep writing I cant wait for more. If you dont update soon I might be forced to poke you with a stick. A SHARP one! 
 Haha...Im such a loser. Loved the story!
-Kim