This is a very interesting story. I don't know a lot about X-Men: Evolution (what I watched of the series was rather early in the series and had a lot of holes in which I didn't get up early enough on Saturday morning to watch it), however I tend to find myself enjoying the Harry PotterXX-Men: Evolution crossovers that I've read, including this one. I sometimes wish your chapters were longer, but other than that, I can't wait to read the next chapter.