Too much reiteration from the previous chapter, and although you did have some fresh material, this story is lacking on a pairing level, unless you count Snape/Lupin slash. With that last statement, yes, I was being slightly sarcastic. Please update soon, and draw some real relationships here. It's beginning to stagnate.
Author's response
Sorry if you feel that way, but this story will not be focusing on relationships on a romantic level as I feel it is unnecessary to the development of the story itself. While some of my other stories will contain elements of Slash, Femmeslash and Het, this one will not.