I must have done something right...I mean, first you update Not Looking and now this. Despite the virus wreaking havoc on my immune system and my terrible case "man voice", this totally made my day. The relationship between Bea and Ayla is stunning and wonderfully written. You can tell she really loves her little girl and the feeling is mutual.
What a morning they had, breakfast at their favorite bakery owned by Bea's good friend Charlotte. Is it me, or was the a shout out? It made me smile.
I also liked Patrick's interaction with Ayla. I imagine he'd be really good with kids, given he's kind of teddybear-esque. I'm liking the tension between Michael and Bea. I'm glad she realized that she shouldn't be with him anymore. He's jerk-ass....ahahhaaa! Anyway, great chapter. I'm giving you yet another rating point. Don't forget to walk him and feed him. Wow. My. Longest. Review. Ever. I need a nap.
Author's response
I'm uber impressed with this review. Thank you for picking up on all my favourite bits too. xxx