Ouu Delilah telling a guy off is pretty awesome! You tell that rich jerk boy he's not worthy! Woot!
I like how your chapters are longer now. I was a bit confused about their mission. Maybe more details about it as their thoughts would clarify it? I dunno, just a suggestion. Don't listen to me, I can barely finish my own story.
Anyhow, good story. Keep up the good work, we're all waiting for an update.