FicWad

the chapter title threw me off, katy. you are a clever spice...

I can tell you like writing about children, and you have interaction with them…it shows through marvelously in your writing. The way Ayla called him “Peter Winter”…that’s just too cute. "Mommy, you're silly! You can't eat me, I'm a real person!" I chuckled ‘cause that was, again, cute. Your writing is turning me into a sap, Katy. How am I suppose to be the bitchiest member of the DoJ with that kind of reputation? However, I insist you continue…

It would remind her she had moral integrity and that she would fight to keep it and not be so willing to throw her moral sense away at the drop of one of his smiles. – I sure hope so. Michael is a douchebag.

"That's between you and Pete......this is between Pete.....and his daughter." – Patrick is a wise man. I also love that Patrick noticed Pete’s mannerisms in Ayla…it shows the reader that it’s not just Bea that sees them, so they are obvious traits she received from him.

All in all, you wrote one hell of a good chapter, British Spice. Have I told you lately that I love you? ‘Cause if not, here’s a rating point…