Really, the "ambience" rating said everything I meant to. However, I'll elaborate - you've a gift for pacing, imagery, and rhythm, and weaving them together. While I've got almost no visual imagination, I found myself picturing scenes while I read this, and that's no mean feat. In another note on the same subject, you manage to build the spirit of camaraderie amongst the Six Mighty Knights excellently, and that's always something that I enjoy.