Did you write this for a challenge or something? I noticed another, similar story posted here a while back. Quite nice, good OC.
Author\'s Response: Actually, I said in the description section that my friend Arashi and I both came up with the scenerio while we were talking one day. Since we both came up with the idea together, we decided to each write up a story using the same theme. You probably read her's first since she was quicker at the keyboard than I was.