I love the way Lulu compares and weighs all of her companions as warriors.
I also absolutely love the description of Auron and Lulu fighting together. That is beautifully done.
Their dialogue in this portion flows remarkably smoothly as well. The mention of the shoopuf is amusing and wonderful.
I love the way Ginnem is so arrogant and bold.
Your description of the chamber of the fayth is wonderful. Yojimbo does crouch very like a spider in that cave - those trailing ribbons that sealed him in remind me of a web.
You describe those flashbacks brilliantly. The gorey scene of Ginnem's death is wondefully and gruesomely written. I love the nasty little touches - how Yojimbo's clothes look so out of place in the carnage, how his dog seems to have actually feasted on some of Ginnem's remains shudders.
You write Yojimbo's dialogue so well too. I love his arrogance, his coldness, the way he rcognizes the value of the items Lulu brings, but discards them nonetheless. I love the mention of "interest" and the way you describe those items Lulu has brought.
Yojimno comes around to naming his price in a very interesting way too. His insults are so cutting and cruel and so very human.
In case you couldn't tell this chapter is my favourite yet.