Review for Lulu's List

Lulu's List

(#) fyre_byrd 2006-04-08

I really enjoy the detailed and interesting way you talk about Lulu's magic. I love the way she is practicing her spell so nonchalantly and how you describe her as reveling in the elements, even the chill of Mt Gagazet.

I like how Wakka's gotten more blase about swearing and I love how Lulu gets so tired of him she just tries to fry him to get him out of the way.

I like how Wakka is all on the make - trying to convince Lulu to come back to Besaid for his own nefarious purposes no doubt. I love how he teases her about turning into Maechen.

I like that Lulu has a separate list for Auron and I like how she permits him to critique her spellwork. I think that's very telling of the relationship they have.

Author's response

Thank you! Poor Wakka. I'm feeling sorry for him even while zapping his butt. The one problem with this ficlet: I just played the Cavern of the Fayth again for research purposes and realized my Lulu is already quite dangerous with the -aga spells by the time they reach Gagazet. Whoops! :)