Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14

I think this is pretty awesome. That's what I think. :)

This one's going on my alerts.

I very much like how you expressed Ava's infatuation with Patrick; mentioned her day dreams and all. We all have them, ya know. ;)

Author's response

Wow, I'm on someone's alerts! I feel so honored! :)