Congratulations on a great story! Well thought out and very imaginative, you can now truly understand life through Archie's eyes and I cannot wait until we get the perspective from Atlanta!
~ Kim
Author's response
Thanks! i'm might be stuck though. i still have to decide if i want to write on the same day. like things that happen to Atlanta on the same day as Archie's dissecting the lung or write about another day. don't know if that made any sense.